Venture Idea...

[FZTofer]

LOL They look great, let me know when you are up and running...looks neat to see those done up.

One suggestion...as a girl....the BIG Clutch apparel would go over better on a girls shirt if it was smaller and off to the side instead of big in the middle. IMO

yea, i was thinking about that, I might just have to do some with both and depending on how the big one works out use one or the other... thanks for the suggestion!

 

[urbanj]

Looks great. Myself personally do not like the big words and slogans but I'm sure what the market likes. I really like the streetfigher one because its not one dimensional.

If you can an idea of always like was with the name clutch apparel which sounds very edgy, I like the look of internal parts. what i can see is

a simple drawn cutaway of a motorcycle engine with a middle cylinder on a power stroke and its all black and white except the flame from the combustion that comes out and surrounds the word "clutch apparel" but the words stacked and apparel not block lettered and smaller. like the main logo but different. the emphasis is on the "power" and that its coming out at you. or something like that.

Or even a bunch of parts like a crankshaft and piston assembly laying out in some oil with clutch apparel in a font that looks like liquid/oil

 

[FZTofer]

Looks great. Myself personally do not like the big words and slogans but I'm sure what the market likes. I really like the streetfigher one because its not one dimensional.

If you can an idea of always like was with the name clutch apparel which sounds very edgy, I like the look of internal parts. what i can see is

a simple drawn cutaway of a motorcycle engine with a middle cylinder on a power stroke and its all black and white except the flame from the combustion that comes out and surrounds the word \"clutch apparel\" but the words stacked and apparel not block lettered and smaller. like the main logo but different. the emphasis is on the \"power\" and that its coming out at you. or something like that.

Or even a bunch of parts like a crankshaft and piston assembly laying out in some oil with clutch apparel in a font that looks like liquid/oil

Those are some good ideas! I'll work on something along those lines :thumbup:

 

[FZTofer]

Ok, so I got part of the website finished (nothing is really working). Its on a test url right now before I put it on the actual one :thumbup: so here it is

MySpace.com - Clutch Apparel - 45 - Male - DEWITT, US - www.myspace.com/electroshockdesigns

let me know what you think :thumbup:

 

[PlasticPig]

Ok, so I got part of the website finished (nothing is really working). Its on a test url right now before I put it on the actual one :thumbup: so here it is

MySpace.com - Clutch Apparel - 45 - Male - DEWITT, US - www.myspace.com/electroshockdesigns

let me know what you think :thumbup:

Couple of minor points, alike is one word, you have a space between the a and l, and also instead of "built with the rider in mind" it might read better and more exclusive if built is replaced with designed.

Can't comment on the designs as they are personal preference.

 

[FZTofer]

Couple of minor points, alike is one word, you have a space between the a and l, and also instead of \"built with the rider in mind\" it might read better and more exclusive if built is replaced with designed.

Can't comment on the designs as they are personal preference.

Thanks for catching that :thumbup: I'll get those fixed up :rockon:

 

[steveindenmark]

You need to design new logos. I have heard most of the ones mentioned already.

Be original and don`t copy...

Steve

 

[FZTofer]

You need to design new logos. I have heard most of the ones mentioned already.

Be original and don`t copy...

Steve

Yep, Thats a good point and I have been making a list of good sayings and also coming up with some ideas for designs as well for the people that don't like the saying style shirts :thumbup:

Also if I make them better & cheaper then the other company then people will be more appt to buy mine :thumbup: lol

Clutch ----->:spank:<----- Other Guy :rockon: :thumbup:

Once again guys thank you so so so much for the suggestions and comments, it really does help out a lot :steve: