Great to be honest, but in a listling like craiglist, a few pics and brief description of the bike (model, year, color, miles) followed by a phone number is best in my experience. Listing out a bunch of flaws on paper makes them seem exaggerated. "Why is this guy writing a book on this chip in the paint if it's so minor?" By no means be secretive, it's just best to disclose that once you've made contact with them so you can talk them through the issues, which usually allows you to place the proper emphasis on the severity of such flaws with the added benefit of voice intonnation, etc.
As sixty says, too long and people gloss over. I've had listing where I've placed a great long description and had no hits on it for weeks, changed it as mentioned and sold it the next day. Perhaps a coincidence, but I still believe short and simple is best when there are so many ads to sift through. Give them a reason to call you for more info.